Love I lost



I loved you Nemea
You were my first cut
I never saw you caming
You got me off guard taking my heart
That's why you blew my mind away


When I first saw you
When I looked in your eyes
My heart pounced fast
Never did I know that yours pounced to
You asked me to be your girlfriend
 
From the jackaranda circle
Where I got the letter you gave to cuslo
The boy who felt the same way you did for me
Yet decided to deliver the message
We were at school
Yet to me you seemed to be a perfect gentle man from Kenya


I loved the way you
You spoke your Swahili mixed with English
You pendelead me(your mapenzi was beautiful), exceptional

About this poem

It's apoem I wrote after getting out of depression of the heart break which I got from high school

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Submitted by hildanamuwanga6 on May 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AXXXX BXXBX CCAXXX BXC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 629
Words 131
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 6, 3

Hilda Namuwanga

I am Hilda from Kampala Uganda,I love poetry,am 29years old.ive written in published books like Rosie (the akampani banishment) and many more.i have acollection of 12 poems and am good n publishing process though funding is not yet seen.i did literature in my advanced level and passed it with B .my email is namuwangahilda6@gmail.com.please do send me ahi if you need to help me out with my writing more…

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