Wilted



When they see me wilt they think I’m dying
In reality, I am only aging

As they forget to rearrange me and pass by me without a smile, I know I’m about to be replaced

But I am okay with that
For I have done my duty and I’m ready to move on

I had stool tall, color and all
I had blossomed - that was their favorite part to see

They loved my aroma, for it reminded them of love and beauty
Those were the things that once represented me

Now that I have started to droop and my colors dull, they start to move away from me as if I were nothing at all
But as I said before, and I’ll say it again, I am okay with that

For it is my duty as a rose to have brought them joy in their lives
And I did
Therefore, I shall continue to wilt until I die

The next rose that replaces me will make them happy in ways that I no longer could
And I am okay with that
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Written on May 22, 2022

Submitted by Serena.aliyah on May 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA X BX CD DD CB XXX XB
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 860
Words 191
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2

Serena Aliyah Wayani

Serena Aliyah is a current undergraduate student completing her degree in English with an emphasis on creative writing. She has been writing poetry for nine years and recently published her first book in 2021 titled “She Was My Everything”. more…

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  • Dougla$Irishman
    A very nice poem about aging, from babe to youth, middle age and ancient !
    Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder, your poem says it all ! A rose is a rose is a rose but still remember beauty is really just skin deep ! Are you OK with that ? 
    LikeReply 11 year ago

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