The Carnival



At the carnival, there was a fun ride
My favorite attraction, in it I had so mich pride
Guarding it was a muscular man
There was a ticket he had to scan
He gave me a dirty look, I almost cried
I was so scared, I felt as if I had died
He let me in, and my tears had dried
I was so scared at that ride I would have a ban
At the carnival
It was finally time to get onthe big slide
Two seated cart, I went on the left side
We went down, I screamed like a hardcore fan
It was so fast, the wind was like a mile I had ran
It was over, I went n the ride
At the carnival
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Submitted by nvinas on May 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme aabbaaabCaabbaC
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 563
Words 129
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15

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