The end " Darkness"



There are times when I wheep it darkens the sky
There are times when I can't sleep the night seems to die
The darker the sky the more I mourn
Light to darkness passes by unnoticed is it my heart that's black cracked and torn open or my mind that's weak fragile and even blank the possibilities bestill me
Empty is what I say
Empty is what they hear
Empty is all I see
There are times when I wheep it darkens the sky
There are time when I can't sleep the night seems to die
Is it night that I see or day no longer exists or my eyes no longer see after my mental emptiness
Is it that I cannot longer sleep or am I in my permanent nightmare
I think I know why darkness fills the sky not night
I guess this is what my life is like after my suicidal death
Darkness The End

About this poem

I don't believe in suicide but I was defeating my demons with death when I wrote this.

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Submitted by rubioceleste79 on May 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AabcdecAafghij
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 769
Words 160
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14

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