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Fractured promises and mended hearts

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You whisper in my ear
Your faint breath caressing my body
It's inching my every pore
You silence my doubt
I cannot contain myself
When in your presence
Our love flows like water
And is rich like soil
You have me entangled in your web
A web you've woven so methodically
Im trapped
Im forgotten
Come for me
Consume me
My patience runs thin
Slowly, day-to-day
Im losing myself without you

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Written on June 22, 2021

Submitted by aprivera1432 on May 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGHIBJKBBLMN
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 390
Words 76
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
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