Over the Water
Over the Water
Sitting on the cement ledge
swishing and splashing
The sound of water hitting the rocks
The wind blowing in your face
The sun shining on the river
The birds chirping
The woodpeckers knocking
sitting there
a cold chill through your body
starting to think negatively
A droplet down the face
Nobody can stop it
Everything starts to hurt
problems at school
Floating around
stressed
Not Feeling good enough
Work harder
Try your best!
Don’t be a stranger in the dark
Come out of the corner!
Don’t keep doubting yourself!
cooling down
What is it that can be done
Focus on school!
Your grades
That’s what’s important
the gravel beneath your feet
walking home
What class can you start with
What assignments
How many
The door creaks open
jumping on the bed
A bird in the air
Grabbing the iPad
Clicking on the lowest class
Assignment after assignment
Your done
The bell rings
Sitting in the seat
feeling a sign of relief
No detentions
No Friday six
finally caught up
About this poem
It’s about a girl who’s struggling in school and she’s sitting on a cement ledge over the water thinking about all of it.
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Written on March 27, 2022
Submitted on April 11, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | AXBXCABB DEECXXFX XAXXAXXGFXH IXXXE GXDEXHG XIXXXX |
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Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 996 |
Words | 193 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 8, 8, 11, 5, 7, 6 |
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