Untitled



Love’s light lit like
the butterfly in the meadow,
her delicate legs dancing
in dew at dusk,
the last rays everywhere,
descending,
down, down,
down to the elemental, to
the truth of it all.

And forgiveness felt like a kiss
and healing felt like healing,
the deep purple of the past
turning—astonishingly—
to white before our eyes.

And the dewdrops made a
tiny whistle when her legs rubbed
against a solitary blade of grass and
only I could hear it.
It sounded like permission, and it was.
It was what I needed to hear at that
moment.

About this poem

I wrote this as a Valentine's Day present to my muse, hero, and fiancé Megan Fernandez.

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Written on February 14, 2022

Submitted by johnnyb.95954 on March 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAXXAXXX XAXXX XXXXXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 553
Words 115
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 9, 5, 7

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Johnny Bardine is a divorce lawyer by day and a frustrated writer by daydream. He lives in St. Petersburg, Florida, with his partner Megan, his 9 year-old son, and menagerie of 15 animals acquired without his consent and sometimes without his knowledge. He has a beard. more…

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