Would It Be OK If I Wrote You A Rhyme?



Would it be ok if I took some of your time?
Would it be ok if I wrote you a rhyme?

Would it be ok if I opened my heart?
Would it be ok if I took on the part

Of being your man and showed you a view,
One that only a real man could do?

Would it be ok if I could make you smile?
Would it be ok if I held you awhile?

Would it be ok if I kissed your gorgeous soft pink lips?
Would it be ok if I were to replace

All the men in your past that just wouldn't do
And vow to be faithful and always be true?

Would it be alright to look in your gorgeous sparkling eyes?
Would it be alright to never tell lies to you?

Would it be alright to find a way?
Would it be alright to long for the day

To pull you close and whisper in your ear
And tell you our feelings are nothing to fear?

Would it be ok if I took some of your time?
Would it be ok if I wrote you a rhyme?

To tell you there's nothing I'd rather do
Than spend my whole life taking care of only you...

About this poem

It is a love and romantic poem for anyone that want to share their feelings but can't find the right words

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Written on February 01, 2022

Submitted by travishinton28 on April 05, 2022

Modified on April 21, 2023

1:11 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA bb cc dd xx cc xc ee xx AA cc
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 953
Words 236
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

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