I still love you (upset and bruised)



In the end I’m retreating
Even though I’m defeated
My lies are less painful
The pain in my pain goes
Away from the sun
And away from the one
And come toward the fun
In retreat from the some
That will hurt and become
Those people in sum some
And I don’t know how to save you
I have always saved you
You are the truth and the one that I can rely on
You my savior don’t act with behavior
Just listen to your heart and please let me inside
I only want to crawl inside your mind and guide
Your pain away from you and back to me the same to
I will always love you I have always loved you
Your touch is more than an ocean of 10
Thanks for the love you’ve given
I will never hate you
Cause I cannot replace you
So here I go retreating
Evenly defeated
upset and bruised but I still love you………

About this poem

I hear it in my head as a song. But I wrote it here as a poem. Take what you want out of it. It’s literally at a but abstract others. You might get the references.

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Written on March 16, 2022

Submitted by Camgina1 on March 16, 2022

Modified on April 02, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEEEFFFGGHIJJGGKEGGABG
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 803
Words 166
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25

Cammeron Widick

Hi. I’m a male of average intelligence who just wants an outlet for his crazy thoughts. If you want to read please let me know what you think. I love feedback. more…

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