Hunting feelings

Kariru 2005 (Bulacan)



I can't bear this anymore,
I always long for her,
I'll count one to four,
Wishing you were there.

Eyes that full of clouds,
Lips that full of sand,
Now, come take my hand,
Just accept, and please don't doubt.

My undying feelings,
It is just like treasure hunting,
Always giving,
But never asking.

Staring at your lovely eyes,
Imagining you could be mine,
Dancing along with the piles,
Moves that make you shine.

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Hiding the love she feels for her

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Written on March 03, 2022

Submitted by praisetigas032305 on March 02, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXAX XBBX XCCC XDXD
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 415
Words 92
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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