When she came



When we had our time we were good together
You teaching me and i listening to you forever
Unfortunately you did not feel the same
You were after him
I loved you for you but you changed for him
Slept with me while dreaming of him  
The way i felt for you,you felt for him
I am not mad just wondering why you lied
I am jealous of him because i will never be him
Just thinking if there is a world where me and you exist
I feel like i will fall until i no longer exist
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Written on September 02, 2022

Submitted by yuvrajkansil007 on February 23, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABCCCCDCEE
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 472
Words 107
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11

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