Confused



We stood old and past our youth
Through our eyes the fear is near
The news is bleak
and hope all but disappeared
No words of comfort or tears
Can hide the hurt
and the sorrow so deep
Fragments of old memories
float a drift through our confused heads
The cries of the joy from children
wild in gardens and running among trees

Now we gather our broken souls
Leaving our tears to dry but never to heal  
Turned back to glance at the shattered faces
and whisper Our silent goodbyes.

About this poem

About friend facing cancer and family memories

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Written on February 17, 2022

Submitted by Poetry@80 on February 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXXXXXAXXA XXXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 485
Words 99
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 11, 4

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