Moving on
your heart is one that is shattered and torn
from all of my mistakes
and i hope that you will bleed so that at least a part of you can repair itself.
and when you have fallen into that void.
can you ask for the reach of my hand?
and be able to hold it tight enough
for me to get you out of where you have gone?
Let go of my hand you said
as i held on
About this poem
this is an older poem that i have written but it's one of my favorites
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Written on November 30, 2020
Submitted by siennapatt432 on February 12, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | ABCDEFGHI |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 352 |
Words | 84 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 9 |
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