Moving on



your heart is one that is shattered and torn
 from all of my mistakes
and i hope that you will bleed so that at least a part of you can repair itself.
and when you have fallen into that void.
can you ask for the reach of my hand?
and be able to hold it tight enough
for me to get you out of where you have gone?
Let go of my hand you said
as i held on

About this poem

this is an older poem that i have written but it's one of my favorites

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Written on November 30, 2020

Submitted by siennapatt432 on February 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHI
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 352
Words 84
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9

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