Can’t you just come to me?



Waking up wishing I didn’t,
Getting off bed and taking a mint.

All these things are being too much,
The only thing I want is feeling your touch.

Can’t u come and live with me?
Lighting up my day while sitting under the three.

It’s been hard for both of us,
So come to me and let’s take the bus.

About this poem

People can’t know about our relationship because we’re both girls. This is why I wrote this and how I feel about it.

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Written on January 24, 2022

Submitted by Ggxzem on January 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA BB CC DD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 307
Words 70
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2

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