Onions are better than the invisible. God




Onions You are better than the invisible God

Onions You are better than the invisible God
You’re visible and helping us to eat
You’re cheaper to have
than my worships and rituals
Oh Onions !
We have created you and harvested you
You gave better result to our work
Oh God !
You are silent on seeing Poors
You are giving fortunes only to rich and wealthy
It is available even for two rupees
It can be cooked even with out oil
But My God!
Can I see you in temples with out money
Can I have your blessings with out tickets
Oh Onions !
You are very closer to a man from a slum
You are impartial to rich and poor
But My Invisible God!
Are you near to us?
Do you favor anything to poor?
Oh My Onions !
Though you are cheap and abundantly available
You are strengthening our heart
By purifying our blood
You are too better than my invisible God
But My Invisible God
What did you do So far?
You have increased worries and pressure
Instead of releasing them
If You are here ,
You will have to protect humbles from the giants
You will have to feed
all lives in this land
Trillions are dying  and billions are going to die
in the race of searching food
But My Onions!
You are doing something to your masters

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Poetical Comparison with God and. Onions

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Written on January 26, 2022

Submitted by saktheee on January 26, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Words 245
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 38

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