Gilbert and the Spiritual Ghost (5/10)




(Continued from 4/10)

The wicked witch
by looking at the future glass
shut down her eyes
with much explanations
and whisper into his ears
silently-
she says, “It is ultimate danger
to cross the river
and the dark forest
to reach the spiritual ghost.
but, I will give you
this lucky charm. You keep it
on your neck
and all the evils will be
frightened of you.”

Choosing a shiny day
he started his journey
towards the dark forest
by taking a very few things
those were necessary he thought arrived.

He arrived at the riverside
to cross,
an one eyed helmsman was there,
as if he was waiting for Gilbert-
the one eyed helmsman said
in a very dull but deep voice,

“I don't take impure souls to cross
the river and since you are a pure soul
I will take you to the other side.”

Thus he started crossing the river.
 

Continued…

About this poem

Pure fiction. Any similarity should be treated as mere coincidence.

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Submitted by hakikur on January 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X XXXXXABBCXDXXAD XACXX EFXXXX FXE B
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 861
Words 192
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 15, 5, 6, 3, 1

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