Comet



I was staring at the stars thinking nonsense,
 all of a sudden , a comet  appears
 in the sky , surprised me.
 ''I'm having a journey, travelling around your earth''; told me.
'' Soon I'll be vanished, make your wish, boy.''
 In my query, I asked, 'why are you so important?'
 It smiles and said, ''unlike the stars, I'm not going to stay with you forever, but in that short amount of time , you must be lucky, to see me .
 I accept your wish, but remember ,stars or moon won't.'' It vanished.
 As I drew my last breath ,remembering that night,
 we never met again.

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It's my first poem actually.

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Written on September 12, 2021

Submitted by biswasankan01 on December 31, 2021

Modified by biswasankan01 on December 31, 2021

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCCDECFGH
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 565
Words 112
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10

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