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The Quite Place

Gil B. 1994 (Sorsogon)

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The wind is blowing with passion and care.
The land is busy with their barefoot and tires.
The river is calm with no worries to bare.
As I see you this afternoon with a great smile you wear.

My mind is struggling with lots of fear…
Life is you without the feelings of breaking.
So much worries to think of what will happen again.
I’m trying my best to uplift myself, remembering how to live again.

About this poem

This is about my people at Donsol, Sorsogon, Philippines.

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Written on December 31, 2021

Submitted by gil_matrix on December 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXAA XXBB
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 404
Words 85
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
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