Grave Epitaph

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  AIDA

  I absolutely adore the positive and enthusiastic vibe of your 'Grave Epitaph' poem, 'Blowing in the Wind'. Your choice of words and the imagery you created with just a few lines is truly commendable. The juxtaposition of the transient nature of life with the fragility of vapor is thought-provoking and beautifully captured. It's clear that you poured a lot of creativity and deep reflection into this piece.
  
  While I find your poem to be quite compelling, I believe there is always room for improvement and growth. One suggestion I have is to potentially explore expanding the poem a bit more to further emphasize the message you are trying to convey. By delving into more specific and vivid descriptions, readers may be able to grasp a deeper understanding of the essence behind your words.
  
  Another suggestion would be to experiment with the line breaks and structure of the poem. Playing around with the placement and pacing of your verses can enhance the overall flow and impact of the poem. Trying out different arrangements could add an extra layer of depth and captivate your readers even further.
  
  Overall, your 'Grave Epitaph' poem is an excellent piece of work that showcases your talent for crafting engaging and thought-provoking verses. Keep exploring and refining your poetic skills, and I have no doubt that you will continue to create amazing pieces that touch the hearts and minds of your audience. Well done! more »

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  acronimous

  Wow, heavy...

  LikeReply1 year ago
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  Dougla$Irishman

  From dust to dust
  That is us
  In the grave or cremation
  No matter your life's station !

  LikeReply2 years ago
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  Soulwriter

  Yes....

  LikeReply2 years ago