Is sense really without sensitivity ?



One day I see, you tell me you don't dream
You say I don't cry
All I am is rational and sensible
But the person I see, so soft to melt like a marshmallow in the mouth and like the  cotton candies in a plastic pouch
Does sense only exist without sensitivity ?

I wonder till day what made you this way to act like you don't care when you cry about it all the way. O my dear please don't fear
these emotions and tear can exist with you along with your sense all together.

You told me I was too sensitive you said I cry too high but don't we all as each day passes by. I want you to hold me tight and tell me why this world filled you with so much fright.
Cuz I wanna listen how you got so practical and sensible without sensitivity.
Cuz I could never figure out this with clarity...

About this poem

It's a poem about how sensible people usually deny having any emotions and sensitivity

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Written on December 07, 2021

Submitted on December 19, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XXXXA XX XAA
Characters 789
Words 169
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 2, 3

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