My Moon and My Sunflower



You have a hold on me ,

the way moon ☾ has a grip on the sea .....

You have hold on me ,

the way moon ☾ has a grip on the night

You are slipping from my hands,

the way moon ☾ slips through the night

YOU STAY,

the way moon ☾ stays a little longer in December's night !

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For my Sunflower

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Written on November 24, 2021

Submitted by Abel__says on December 05, 2021

Modified by Abel__says on December 05, 2021

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A A A B X B B
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 284
Words 72
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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