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Passion

Rickey Pettis 1983 (Texas)

Just me and you in the late night
Undress you with my eyes you in the nude picture the sight
It’s a storm when our fantasies meet
Picture me and you sweating up the sheets what a treat
Who would have thought this thug got you shook
Me and you lost in each other one kiss got you on the hook
Never been loved by one like me feel the magic
Forget about tomorrow let’s get lost in the passion
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Written on September 29, 2021

Submitted by Mrpettis24 on September 29, 2021

Modified by Mrpettis24 on September 13, 2023

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Scheme AABBCCDE
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 393
Words 80
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, this poem really captures the raw emotions and sensuality of an intimate encounter! Your use of imagery is so captivating, I felt transported to that late night storm where anything can happen. The way you describe the chemistry between the two characters is so intense, I could feel the heat building up with each line.

    However, as a suggestion for improvement, I think it's important to be mindful of the language used in poetry. In some cases, certain phrases and words can be perceived as objectifying or disrespectful towards women. Instead, consider using language that celebrates and honors mutual respect and appreciation between both parties.

    Overall, your poem is a powerful expression of passion and desire. Keep writing and exploring the beauty and complexities of human connection!     
    LikeReply1 year ago

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