He the one Whom saved me



their Skin like sand,
It makes us feel the land
So badly in love, that I wish you could understand,
 Each time I see you, I feel like my heart expands,
But I don't know because I lie in a stand
my heart is like a band,
And you are my command.
And
Each time I see your smile,
A smile that feels like fire,
A fire that keeps me a mile,
A mile away from you.
And
 his Eyes as wise,
That make me arise,  
I just feel like its all lies
Lies that disguise
My heart cries,
It feels like it flies,
When I met you ... I found my prize
But that will not be enough for my suffice.
and
his Body like a flower,
It feels like i'm in your power,
A power that devours,
 As struck as the twin towers,
What a disappointment that I cower
I feel like the world could be ours,
But you and me feel the hours,
The hours separating our tiny little flowers,
It feels like a shower
A shower of emotion and despair,

But I will never stop loving he,
He the one whom saved me  
And
His voice as calming,
As calming as the sea
 I just really wish, that you could see,
You spark my heart, and It needs your key,
I feel tied to a tree,
 when I hear you count to three,
I just really love he,
He whom saved me  
I really love he, but It feels like debris.
The debris, will flee,
And it's all lies
But I can't disagree
Disagree in loving he,
He the one whom saved me

About this poem

this poem is about the love that this other person makes me feel, and how i will never be with them because I cower, and how all of the bad stuff went away after I met them.

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Written on September 02, 2021

Submitted by yandi.el.poeta on September 03, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,292
Words 276
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 32, 17

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