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Feels

Malaysia 2003

Rhymed
It feels good.

This guy: he makes me feel good.
My heart rate speeds up
And this feeling I have makes me
Feel like time is just stuck.

It feels good.

He feels good.
It all feels better when it’s done by him
And next thing I know
The sun’s light is getting dim.
And by the darkness I leave him
With my pleasure bar filled to the brim.

About this poem

This poem is about lust and how I felt alive.

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Written on August 02, 2021

Submitted by malay_c on August 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A axxx A abxbbb
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 327
Words 69
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 1, 6
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