Grieving Mom and Dad
My mom and dad are in heaven with the Lord
This I cannot afford
Without my mom and dad
I am so sad
How am I ever going to survive
I just don't feel as alive
I am so numb
As small as a crumb
My mom understood me so much
She knew about mental illness and such
My dad I feel I didn't really know
Our relationship didn't grow
My mom died of breast cancer
I will always miss her
My dad committed suicide
Man, I just want to hide
Without them, I am not as shiny as a gem
About this poem
This poem was written while grieving the loss of my mom and dad.
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Written on June 28, 2020
Submitted by mccolley_h on July 19, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
| Scheme | AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHI |
|---|---|
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 448 |
| Words | 101 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 17 |
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