Fallen star



Such a lonely star is surrounded by many other stars
Fallen down
Nothing matters.
How many birds fly in the sky?
A bird
If lost, no one finds that one.

Like so many stars on earth
Bursting every year
Lack of care is falling many stars
No one is keeping any news.

If these fallen stars
It could have been nurtured properly
The world would have been even more sweet
No one would be hurt.

That day will ever come, that
Those stars won't drop anymore
If you nurture them before they fall
No one in the world will be unhappy anymore.

About this poem

To those marginal dropouts.

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Submitted by hakikur on June 28, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXXXX XXAX AXXX XBXB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 511
Words 102
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 4, 4

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