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Hear Me Cry

Tonie Pate 1975 (California)

Days go by when I don't think about you what you did to me. I still ask myself if you were worth dying for cause all it ever got was nothing. Why did I take your word I trusted you. Why did you lie to me I believed you. Now I have no life, no wife, no kids and nobody to love me cause I'm  dead. Because I drunk myself to death for you. You didn't love or even care about me. Why did I do that to myself. Do you hear me cry over and over again just because I still love you and want you.

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its about how addiction to alcohol can take away your life.

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Written on November 21, 2000

Submitted by patetoni75 on June 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Characters 487
Words 107
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Tonie Pate is 45yrs old wife and mother of 3 wonderful kids and Mimaw to 3 awesome grandkids. I'm child of God. I love to write poetry and its always from my heart and things that have happen in my life. more…

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