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Smoking hearts

Laura Thorne (Caesar) 1973 (Florida)

Ballad
You and me smoking hearts
You’ve hit me with all your darts
As a Cupid with a smile
It’s you all the while
That makes my day
And I want to express what I want to say
You are seductive with your tongue
My heart you have stung
Full of love it’s Venom so sweet
It leaves nothing but a treat
In my mind as perfect as you are
You shine like the brightest star
I miss you as I am on a cloud
Here as I profess my love out loud
You are the one thing I must possess
It is all I want I must confess.

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Written on June 21, 2021

Submitted by twistbarbie1 on June 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABBCCDDEEFFGGHH
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 487
Words 108
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
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Laura Thorne (Caesar)

Writer and poet written for years and was originally on poetry.com writing an epic trilogy and also a love poem book more…

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