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Lost in love

Lilanie Nel 2000 (Ceres)

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Here I stand..lost in love,
lost in love Infront of you.

Infront of you Asking for forgiveness
For forgiveness With my heart open wide
And damaged beyond repair

I try to tell you how I feel
But somehow the words just dont exist
And I cant keep on doing this..

Doing this because fear gives great power in being brave...
but being brave makes me afraid...
Afraid and lonesome me...
Wondering is it really me with whom you want to be...

Do you really want to be with an Afraid, lonesome me..with a damaged ..beyond repair heart, that's standing infront of you ...lost in love..

your love

About this poem

It's about love ,and how strong it can be, it makes a person see a person in a different way,a better way than he/she see's his/herself

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Submitted by lilanienel07 on June 13, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AX XXX XXX XXBB A
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 573
Words 109
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 3, 4, 1
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