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Something about your Lips

Tommy Edwards 1988 (nashville)

As i kiss your lips, You make my body shiver.
I hold your hand looking into your eyes, i see a passion
of a burning sun.
As i see the love ive been cleansing for, Hoping one day you'll still be mine.
As i think of you, I look at the woman I've searched all
my life for.
The sun rises aver the southern sky, Still cant tell you
how much I Love You.
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Submitted by edwardstommy1988 on May 27, 2021

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABBCDEFF
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 341
Words 74
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
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Tommy Edwards

Hi im Tommy Ive been writing poetry for awhile just never published it but i hope you come to enjoy and thank you so much. mi hope you and your love one comes to enjoy and listen as you speak it to there heart. more…

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