Analysis of Since you've been gone!

Imran Ahmed 2001 (Sindh)



A sky full of clouds,
And clouds full of lives,
I could see no life,
In life, that I'm living!

The absence you left in my room,
Is always full of your presence,
With some vows that
We made and broke.

When the desert dances,
And woes for a chaos he loves,
I ask my loneliness to,
Pour some whiskey,
Into my cup,
Which is full yet empty.

Did you see in the letters,
That I've written to you,
The thought,
That keeps bleeding,
Has been echoed to our memories,
And got smashed.

In my dizziness,
And in my fantasies,
There's still a harmony,
And still some stillness.


Scheme XXXA XXXX XXBCXC XBXADX EDCE
Poetic Form
Metre 01111 01111 11111 011110 01011011 1111110 1111 1101 101010 01101011 1111001 1110 0111 111110 1110010 111011 01 1110 1110110100 011 01100 001100 110100 01110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 546
Words 108
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 6, 6, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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