Analysis of He who never leaves



"Amy, are you listening ?", Emily asked.
Suddenly it struck me what was I thinking
"Nothing", I answered.
She carried on with her conversation
Here I'm battling with myself
"Amy no", I said. "Amy yes", he said.
He was taking over my body.
It was coming. No, it shouldn't be
Further, the time goes weaker I became.
All those words I hate the most are echoing in my ears.
"you're no good, a total loser", he continued
I need to spit out this poison
But where?
There she finds where.
She excused herself from the dragging conversation
She waited for it to be out of her body
Screamed in silence
Finally, it stops.
He's gone. She was at peace

The phone rang, she picked up
"Where are you", Emily asked.
She put on a smile and responded

A part of her knew he will be back soon.


Scheme AXXBXXCCXXXBDDBCXXX XAX X
Poetic Form
Metre 10111001001 10011111110 10110 110110010 1110011 1011110111 111010110 111011101 1001110101 11111011100011 111010101010 11111110 11 1111 101011010010 110111111010 1010 10011 111111 011111 1111001 111010010 0110111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 812
Words 153
Sentences 15
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 19, 3, 1
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 210
Words per stanza (avg) 49
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Submitted by aishaxxxx01 on May 06, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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