Analysis of Fetal errors

Kalai 1961 (Chennai)



Is it a fetal error
or a fatal error
that built my destiny?
prolonged painful life
makes me wonder
again and again
is it worth to live here?
as I live my life through
without expecting
what to do
it once again reminds
Am I living a life
full of fetal errors
or mere fatal moments
that reflect my unspent
karma  all these days.


Scheme AABCADEFGFHCIJKL
Poetic Form
Metre 1101010 101010 111100 01101 1110 01001 111111 111111 01010 111 110101 111001 111010 111010 101101 10111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 314
Words 64
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 259
Words per stanza (avg) 65
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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