Analysis of Shadows



Like a cavernous emptiness deep in the earth screaming to the skies to bring rebirth.
It was only the cry of a single heart
shattering like glass as it broke apart.

Lead, follow or get out of the way.
A living death if you don’t obey.
Entreat your soul from surreal effects,
breathe once again without life’s defects.

Listen hard to what I'm telling you
whether you believe it to be false or true.
I know what I began here as
and something’s in me no one has.

I learn and grow here every day
and look at life in several ways.
So do you want the same here too?
Then you need to change your point of view.

That broken heart will someday mend
and the darkness in you will descend.
You have to finally let that past go
so all that haunts you does not show.

Your strength surpasses that pain inside
but it’s something that only you can decide.
In your choice lies the truth within
where the spark of hope may yet begin.

Gelene Beverly
PathofStars


Scheme XAA BBCC DDEE BXDD FFGG HHII XC
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 101001001001101011101 11100110101 1001111101 110111101 010111101 11110101 110101110 101111101 10101111111 11110111 0101111 110111001 01110101 11110111 111111111 1101111 001001101 1111001111 11111111 110101101 1110110111 01110101 101111101 1100 1
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 926
Words 180
Sentences 15
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 106
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on May 03, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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