Analysis of This would be Home, But???



When I entered I felt warmth of Christmas morning
Or the crisp of the morning air on a breezy and beautiful day
If I seen the clouds, piled upon each other like blankets of fluff
Sitting by a fire all warm and stuff
Waking to the birds chirping such a gorgeous song
I could have stayed forever, but I feel so alone
In this dwelling you call home


Scheme ABCCDEF
Poetic Form
Metre 111011111010 10110101101001001 1110110111011011 1010101101 101011010101 1111010111101 0110111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 342
Words 68
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 276
Words per stanza (avg) 68
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Submitted by mikeldurst1984 on April 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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