Analysis of Her Agony

Archer A'tin 2001 (Sta. Rosa Del Sur Pasacao, Camarines Sur)



Ruler at the peak of realm
My superior is not him,
He loses her love at one toss
Cause of everyone loss.

Exhausted soul, tired body, want to give up this time
But foolish mind wants to run another mile,
She’s strong, but she’s kind to be wrong
When her tears choose to fall out of her home.

It’s her, she’s near, at last she’s here
At the end of her fear,
Every sentence that she heard
Every word is rare to be hear.

Leaving him at cold floor
With his body freezing at the open door,
Her heart shatter into pieces
When she sees her love ones lifeless.

It’s hard, why fate is so cruel
Why her life need to be ruin,
To feel the agony?
Or to learn to accept that everything has come to its end.
Your misery is every one misery
That hoping it’s just a tragic fantasy, but you’re in reality,
Where you think life is ungrateful and unfair
When the fact it’s great and fair.

Beautiful flower
You’re too special to wept here at the dim corner,
Stand, show them you’re not frail
You’re just wounded and need to be heal.


Scheme XXAA XXXX BXXB CCXX XXDXDDEE FFXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1010111 10100111 11001111 11101 01011010111111 11011110101 11111111 1011111101 10111111 101101 10010111 100111111 101111 11101010101 01100110 11101110 11111110 10111110 110100 11110111011111 110011001100 1101101010011010 11111010001 1011101 10010 111011110110 111111 111001111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,007
Words 197
Sentences 8
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 8, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 130
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted by villarazahannahmicah on April 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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