Analysis of Ode to Atrophied



Your sweet voice like that of chalk against blackboards,
Bubbles of anal wind gurgling from your mouth.
Your striking eyes like golf balls sopping with mucus,
Crying sweaty foamballs over misfortunes of an ant.

I see you are no earthly being;
Who could play the pink oboe with their elbows?
I see you are no slimy refuse;
Who else would have the courage to chew pillows of blood?

Sliding down up the roads of Boogerland,
You enjoyed the screech of jealous spleens.
As the world went down in flames of disgust,
You panicked as you started peeing in greens.


Scheme AXXB XXXX BAXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 1111111011 101101100111 110111110110 1010110010111 111111010 1110110111 111111001 1111010111011 10110111 101011101 1011101101 1101110101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 544
Words 99
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 148
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted by SirArthurStreebGreeb on April 22, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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