Analysis of Empty and alone, salvation out of reach...

Deliverence Rise 1979 (Tennessee)



Come to me my sweetest love
My dream from above
Life is like an empty dream
Without you here you here my majestic queen
Like a ronin without a cause
I wait for you life on pause
Can you hear my painful cries
Here in wait my soul lies
I walk through life empty and alone
I morn for you a love unknown
I see you in my dreams out of reach
My words received as babbled speech
I lay here in anxiety and bereft
Shall this be my final breath


Scheme AABCDEFFGGHHIJ
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101 11101 1111101 01111110101 10100101 1111111 1111101 101111 111110001 11110101 111011111 11011101 11100100001 1111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 423
Words 91
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 344
Words per stanza (avg) 91
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Submitted by deliverence_rise on April 22, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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