Analysis of Kindness



Have you been kind to yourself?

Before the time ran out on you playing the martyr or uncaring…

Did you ever say no to concealed wickedness, or store them painfully in a memory shell?

Wisdom, did it occur to you, to do it with daring?

Have you been kind to yourself?

And thought, what would you give selflessly?

To the deserving and the one in need?

Love, help, a patient ear, did that thought germinate from this seed?

With all that you have, did your void let you wander aimlessly?

Have you ever been kind to yourself?

To choose a wise company that does not tread you,

On the path regrettable like a bolt from the blue,

Abstain from over indulgence, like a magic from the sweet fairy,

Did your egotistical mind, feel less airy?

Have you been kind to yourself?

To let in what boosts your morale and emotions,

Like a magical fountain with happiness potions.

To ignore the noxious like a scrap on the street,

To well meaning people and thoughts did you meet?

Have you been kind to yourself?

To empathize with your reasonable needs,

Even when your mind dragged you to accepting awful deeds?

To choose balance over excess,

Choose moderate when choices were surplus?

Have you been kind to yourself?

And given others a piece of your heart,

To be in their shoes, did you spring up this art?

Put a smile on those you meet everyday,

Keeping your troubles aside if you may…

Have you been kind to yourself?

Traveled within your mind subconscious,

Did you halt on a station that felt nauseous?

Of the unkind views, did you ever gush them out?

Or did they stay like an uninvited guest, stubborn and stout?

Have you been kind to yourself?

Shared joy, beauty, ideas that make your inner core?

Did you sail through the stormy waves and land on the seashore?

And still have love in your heart that shines,

Like a diamond in the coal mines.

Have you been kind to yourself?

And knew who to give your heart and soul?

For only the precious that cares truly,

Can sing with you and dole,

Even during the times unruly.

Have you ever been kind to yourself?

To make poison walk miles away,

Like a never ending hike,

On any given day,

Painting your inner wall to the pure color white.

Have you ever been kind to yourself?

And not let your loved ones take advantage undue?

A knotty resolve to do them good and you,

Your unkindness are the tales told?

Gliding you on guilty-trips no matter how many years you are old?

Have you been kind to yourself?

To let the noise slide away in oblivion,

When lies and deceit layered like an onion,

What’s good for your life amidst the disorder,

Did you slice and spice it up to create a delicious platter?

Adding condiments from the pantry of the savvy,

Finding the missing piece for the puzzle, you feel less heavy?

Have you been kind to yourself?

Sans the pitter-patter of unthinking,

Sang lulluby to impulse blinking,

Every now and then coaxing actions unkind.

Each day, do you rewind, before you unwind?

Have you been kind to yourself?


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111101 01011111100101010 111011101100111100001001 10110111111110 1111101 0111111 1001000101 11010111110111 111111111110100 111011101 110110011111 1010100101101 01110010101010110 11010011110 1111101 110111010010 1010010110010 101010101101 11101001111 1111101 1101110001 10111111010101 1110101 1100110010 1111101 0101001111 11011111111 1011111101 1011001111 1111101 100111010 11110101110 100111110111 11111101011001 1111101 1110010111101 1111010101101 011101111 10100011 1111101 011111101 1100101110 111101 101001010 111011101 11101101 1010101 110101 101101101101 111011101 011111101001 01001111101 111011 10111011101101111 1111101 110110100100 11001101110 01111010010 1110111101001010 1010010101010 100101101011110 1111101 101101010 1111010 100101101001 11111001101 1111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,887
Words 538
Sentences 42
Stanzas 67
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 67
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 35
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted on April 09, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Vaishali Adwant

All of my poetry is available on my blog https://ainperiodic.wordpress.com Vaishali Adwant's experience ranges from designing couture for her label Faporazee, to serially blogging in fashion, music, arts and entertainment genre. She loves gardening, pets, cooking, glass painting, and is a voracious reader. Her wide spectrum of interests range from binge watching movies, sitcoms, enjoying a good debate, coming up with original insights and exploring anything that interests her. With a great gung-ho for life, she is busy exploring anything that catches her attention and interest. more…

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