Analysis of Worked-Out Mine

Edward George Dyson 1865 (Ballarat, Victoria) – 1931 (Saint Kilda, Melbourne, Victoria)



On summer nights when moonbeams flow  
 And glisten o’er the high, white tips,  
And winds make lamentation low,  
 As through the ribs of shattered ships,  
And steal about the broken brace          
 Where pendant timbers swing and moan,  
And flitting bats give aimless chase,  
 Who dares to seek the mine alone?  

The shrinking bush with sable rims  
 A skeleton forlorn and bowed,          
With pipe-clay white about its limbs  
 And at its feet a tattered shroud;  
And ghostly figures lurk and groan,  
 Shrill whispers sound from ghostly lips,  
And ghostly footsteps start the stone          
 That clatters sharply down the tips.  

The engine-house is dark and still,  
 The life that raged within has fled;  
Like open graves the boilers chill  
 That once with glowing fires were red;          
Above the shaft in measured space  
 A rotted rope swings to and fro,  
Whilst o’er the plat and on the brace  
 The silent shadows come and go.  

And there below, in chambers dread          
 Where darkness like a fungus clings,  
Are lingering still the old mine’s dead—  
 Bend o’er and hear their whisperings!  
Up from the blackness sobs and sighs  
 Are flung with moans and muttered fears,          
A low lament that never dies,  
 And ceaseless sound of falling tears.  

My ears intent have heard their grief—  
 The fitful tones of Carter’s tongue,  
The strong man crushed beneath the reef,          
 The groans of Panton, Praer, and Young,  
And ‘Trucker Bill’ of Number Five,  
 Along the ruined workings roll;  
For deep in every shoot and drive  
 This mine secretes a shackled soul.          

Ah! woful mine, where wives have wept,  
 And mothers prayed in anxious pain,  
And long, distracting vigil kept,  
 You yawn for victims now in vain!  
Still to that god, whose shrine you were,          
 Is homage done in wild device;  
Men hate you as the sepulchre  
 That stores their bloody sacrifice.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,910
Words 305
Sentences 10
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 48
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 230
Words per stanza (avg) 51
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Edward George Dyson

Edward George Dyson, or 'Ted' Dyson, was an Australian journalist, poet, playwright and short story writer. He was the elder brother of illustrators Will Dyson (1880–1938) and Ambrose Dyson (1876–1913), with three sisters also of artistic and literary praise. Dyson wrote under several – some say many – nom-de-plumes, including Silas Snell. In his day, the period of Australia's federation, the poet and writer was 'ranked very closely to Australia's greatest short-story writer, Henry Lawson'. With Lawson known as the 'swagman poet', Ogilvie the 'horseman poet', Dyson was the 'mining poet'. Although known as a freelance writer, he was also considered part of The Bulletin writer group. more…

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