Analysis of Young One - Oh Venerated One



Young One,
What heights have you inspired son, or ode to joys created
or reveries of victories been part of, or of life sated?

Why does your portrait not hang upon my walls?

Have you treked and been forgotten? Stood your ground alone?
Embarked, o'er completed something, rode it through a storm?

Oh Venerated One,
I turned too many a leaf, leaving scatterings still unshorn!
Rode great cosmic cycles, beyond and back, far from home!

Don't judge me! I've lived past lives!

A part of me, is a part you, and we are what's been fated!
Scraped, clamoring, through physicality I come, now unabated!


Scheme AXB X XX AAX X BB
Poetic Form
Metre 11 111101011111010 1100110011111110 11110110111 1110101011101 01100101011101 11001 111100110111 1110100101111 1111111 011110110111110 110011111010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 581
Words 104
Sentences 11
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 1, 2, 3, 1, 2
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted on September 05, 2009

Modified on March 05, 2023

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