Analysis of You



You awakened me with a touch,
your kiss gave me the hope I needed so much.
You brought spring into a wintery heart,
and light into the darkest part.

Your voice soothes,
like the music that makes my body move.
Your lips make me beg for more,
as each kiss is better than the one before.

Your eyes are deep enough to drown in,
to close my own would be a sin.
Your hair,
a sea of brown, where my fingers wander there.

You arms keep me, hold me, safe and secure,
a world where I want to stay for sure.
Your body warm, you hold me close and tight,
as we make love throughout the night.


Scheme AABB XXCC DDEE FFGG
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 10101101 11110111011 11101011 01010101 111 1010111101 1111111 11111010101 111101110 11111101 11 01111110101 1111111001 011111111 1101111101 11110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 567
Words 118
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 111
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted on October 09, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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doreka vaughn

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