Analysis of Working Too Hard



Jumping into the fray,
holding onto nothing,
she grasps for purchase
on an iron wall of surrender.
She feels as though
she’s slid into someone else’s skin,
wriggling to keep the water
below her gasping mouth.
Like being born into a broken body,
like assuming an illness,
she has taken on new responsibilities
and won’t shake them from her mind.
She’s bleeding before the wound,
she’s running ahead of the cart,
searching for Fate
even before her time has come.


Scheme ABCDEFDGHCIJKLMN
Poetic Form
Metre 100101 101010 11110 111011010 1111 11011101 111010 010101 11010101010 1010110 11101100100 0111101 1100101 11001101 1011 10010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 455
Words 80
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 365
Words per stanza (avg) 80
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kassandra M. Konecny

Kassandra Konecny is a lover of listening to music, hiking in the mountains, and observing the way people act. She began writing vigorously when she was fourteen and will hopefully never stop. She has had her fair share of trials lately, and tries to encompass nearly every subject there is to study into her writing. Kassandra plans to study creative writing and psychology. She's 17 and currently lives in Utah with her family. Contact her at kassandrakonecny@hotmail.com more…

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