Analysis of Without You



As I look back and reminisce, I can't believe I'm here without you,

I feel as if I'm dreaming, yet I know it's true,

To lose a mother and sister within hours of eachother,

Tears me apart everyday, but you two are together,

That was Gods will and nobody could change anything,

What I wouldn't give to hear my angels once again sing,

I didn't have the chance to fix my mistakes between us,

So, I live with regret, that just won't ease up,

I am a daughter to one, a little sister to the other,

I look forward to the day we meet again and are together forever,

Until then, I am living my life and hoping to make you proud,

I yearn for your approval knowing you can't give it from your cloud,

My sister, my angel you are missed so much,

I wish i could hug you, feel just a little touch,

My mother, my teacher, my role model, my sweetheart,

I never thought i would go through life without you, apart,

I can't change the fact that I lost you two,

I just have to accept the fact that I'm here without you


Scheme A A B B C C X X B B D D E E F F A A
Poetic Form
Metre 1111001110111011 111111011111 11010010011011 11011011111010 1111011110 11101111101011 11010111101011 11110111111 1101011010101010 1110101110101010010 0111110110101111 1111010101111111 11011011111 111111110101 110110111011 11011111101101 1110111111 11110101111011
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 979
Words 197
Sentences 1
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 42
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 42
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Submitted on April 28, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Cindy Murphy

I am a mother of 5 and a devoted wife. My poems are my emotions based on events/traumas in my life. I hope you enjoy reading them, for i greatly enjoy writing them more…

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