Analysis of With Your To Live



I shall always wait for you with my deep love
To sleep in the shades of your own true love
Shall stay away and far to hear your voices
Waiting for you to reach me like a cool wind
To wake me up any time and from my dreams
For us to fly high like love birds in the skies

Looking into the mirror made by the moonlight
Was searching to see your own cute delights
With those shining eyes and your smiling face
Waiting as if ready to deliver me your kisses fine
Was searching in the air to hear your own voice
Was also feeling your fragrance reaching fine.

Seeing the boundary lines that were seen drawn
When our parents were making too much fences
I was wishing that the love rain shall make floods
To wipe and take away all the fences seen made
While I was searching ways to break all the knots
That had chained me and from reaching you to live

Seeing you in immense sorrow and in much tears
The wind came and informed me your dear wishes
I was then made ready to make up my sad mind
To wear the armour of love to fight the deadly foe
While they were planning to take me too far away
That I did break with a firm plan to be with you to live.


Scheme AABCXX XXXDXD XBXXXE XXCXXE
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111111 1100111111 11010111110 10111111011 11111010111 11111111001 10010101101 1101111101 1110101101 101110101011101 11000111111 11010110101 10010011011 110100101110 11101011111 110101101011 11110111101 11110110111 101001100011 01100111110 111110111111 1101011110101 110101111101 11111011111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,115
Words 231
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 227
Words per stanza (avg) 58
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Submitted on August 17, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Joyce Anthappen

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