Analysis of With no sugar coat



I am half grown or little opened flower
I need love and your affectionate shower
I gave this chance to none but only to you as lover
You are the one that stole my heart for ever

I prefer to remain under veil
Where no one can misunderstand me or fail
Touch the beauty and spoil the show
As I am destined to smell scent and grow

I have wonders all round to feel
People used to appreciate but same time wanted to kill
Crush me under their feet and walk over
I always needed safe passage and cover

You came in my life as smiling man
I felt at first sight to be your special woman
I don't know how did it happen?
I had never expected or dreamt even

Some people need careful attention
Need praises and special mention
As their presence itself is giving effect
We are bound to look at and act

I felt hidden pulse and agreed
As you had expressed it as no lust or greed
I decided to fall in your line
But some of the sentiments I could not not sideline

I shall stay with you for ever and cherish
I wanted a man of my desire with powerful wish
You fulfilled all my expectations
I am now ready for bond and healthy relation

I wish no more set back to suffer
I am sincere believer and accept your offer
I may swim or sink in your boat
I wish your words are full of promises and with no sugar coat


Scheme AAAA BBCC XXAA XDDX DDXX EEFF GGXD AAHH
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 11111101010 11101010010 11111111011110 11011111110 101101101 1111001111 10100101 1111011101 11101111 10110101111011 1110110110 1110110010 110111101 111111111010 11111110 11100101110 110110010 11001010 11100111001 11111101 11101001 11101111111 11011011 111010011111 11111110010 110011101011001 10111010 1111011010010 111111110 1101010001110 11111011 1111111100011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,253
Words 259
Sentences 2
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 128
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Submitted on May 28, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:18 min read
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Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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