Analysis of Why Can't We Be



Always thinking of you,
Can't get you out of my mind
Maybe because of your beauty,
Someone like you is so hard to find.
I loved you from a distance,
Trying to be near you
That even atthis instance,
All I think is of you.
And I know you are thinking "Is it true"?
This love I feel for you?
You have driven me crazy since we've been apart
These words come straight from my heart.
Yoou know "I love you"
And you know I care
But when ever I'm around
You never seem to be there.
Why is it this way?
Like if our love fades away
Why can't we be
Together for ever Just you and me.


Scheme ABCBDADAAAEEAFGFHHCC
Poetic Form Etheree  (35%)
Metre 11011 1111111 10011110 11111111 1111010 101111 110110 111111 0111110111 111111 111011011101 1111111 11111 01111 1110101 1101111 11111 11101101 1111 0101101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 553
Words 119
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 434
Words per stanza (avg) 119
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Submitted on September 25, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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