Analysis of What He Said



A promise of there will be
But an knowing insecurity that there's not
Waiting patiently as the hands
Go around the clock
Waiting patiently as your hands
Hit my spot
Waiting patiently as if
You were a god
So patient
Too patient
Patiently waiting


Scheme ABCDCBEFGGH
Poetic Form
Metre 0101111 11100100111 10100101 10101 10100111 111 1010011 1001 110 110 10010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 234
Words 44
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 200
Words per stanza (avg) 44
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Submitted on October 03, 2009

Modified on March 05, 2023

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