Analysis of Washed in the Flame of a Small Galaxy



Jenny waits 3,000 moon-shaped miles away
In Berkeley as I streak to be with her
This daughter of mine
 who time has washed
In the flame of a small galaxy
 where only certain children
Are born, those who can feel
 the brightest clouds
 and lead the rest of us
To the edges of our worlds
Up the mountains of our lives
Instructing us to part the curtains
 demand light
And share it with those who have trouble
 stepping out of the shadows.

This is Jennifer, from that small galaxy
 who broke the code
 right from the beginning.


Scheme XXXXAXXXXXXXXXX AXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10111101 0101111110 11011 1111 001101100 1101010 111111 0101 010111 10101101 10101101 010111010 011 011111110 101101 11100111100 1101 110010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 507
Words 98
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 15, 3
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 207
Words per stanza (avg) 49
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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