Analysis of Walking on Sunshine!



I'm walking on water
I'm walking on water
My life as be Living water!
The love I had for you is like
the living water but it as
be a long journey for me.
It like walking on water
I want you so much but I learn
that you did'nt want me
and that life. I want you to walk with
me but I can't that life.
I'm walking on
the moon for some love for me.
Walking on
Sunshine?
I be prayer for you,Please keep
me in your prayer? You always be in my heart?
I cry so much and you was there to dry my eye?


Scheme AAabcdaedfghdhijkl
Poetic Form
Metre 110110 110110 11111010 01111111 01010111 1011011 1110110 11111111 11111 011111111 111111 1101 0111111 101 1 111111 1011111011 111101111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 473
Words 109
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 368
Words per stanza (avg) 108
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Submitted on January 15, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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